Below is the second draft of our production.
Feedback
We sought feedback from our media teachers about our second draft. Our teachers said that they were really happy with the improvements we had made already and our production had moved forward a lot, they did however give us some feedback on how to improve our product even further:
- The use of sound, they said that we needed more sound bridges and to incorporate more sound into our production in general to draw the audience in. They specifically said that we needed sound at the beginning of our production as the long period of silence made them feel awkward.
- Our teachers also said that to further impove our production we should consider using original sound which we could make on GarageBand.
- They also said that we should consider getting rid of the stop motion effect at the end of our product, they said that our end sequence was very powerful and the stop motion effect detracts from the scene.
